My Gorgeous Billionaire Sugar Daddy

Hey guys! My blazing hot short story is out on Literotica. I’d like to hear what you think about it. And if you do like it, you would love my novella out on sale now at Amazon. Sale is only until today, so hurry up!


4 thoughts on “My Gorgeous Billionaire Sugar Daddy

  1. I just gave it a read (so glad I was by myself… I didn’t think that through when I clicked on it. ROFL!)

    Hawt stuff! I don’t read a huge amount of erotica, but I’m not shy of it.

    I think it has a great narrative arc to it.. I think that if it was longer I would like to see Cara be more in control of the whole deal, you know? But working within the constraint of a short story means that you don’t have a lot of space to work in those kinds of changing dynamics.

    Am I making any sense? Heh heh.

    I hope she’s getting a lot of cash for it.. even if it is, uh, a ‘pleasurable’ job. She better be getting big bucks! šŸ˜€

    1. LOL on opening the link without thinking that it’s NSFW. I’m concentrating on erotica right now as it is where the money trail leads. Don’t get me wrong, I love erotica as a reader, although I wish some authors would have their works edited more thoroughly, as it totally ruins my reading experience if I read one more “would of had”.

      I do get what you’re saying. That short story was just metaphorically sitting on my desk and I didn’t have any more ideas for it. So I just thought, what the heck, I’ll post it on Literotica and maybe the readers will give me feedback and ideas. So far I’ve got two, including yours. šŸ™‚ Thank you!
      Oh, and she is getting a lot for it, including hot sex

      1. Good, good!

        I agree with you, I think that too many writers rush to get their work out there and dont take any time out to edit.

        Yeah, maybe next time, for my sake at least, add a disclaimer: “warning, do not read in a crowded space”


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